Contents Page: Second Draft

This is the second draft of the contents page for my music magazine. I have listened to the feedback that I was previously given from my teacher. 

I have taken out the UK's top 10 albums, I did this because that section was taking up too much of the page and there wasn't enough room for images. 
My teacher told me that my images should feature more on the contents page as they were good images and the page looked as if it had to much text on it, so I enlarged the images and repositioned them in the new space that I had created by moving the 'UK's top 10 albums' section of the page.

I also rearranged the contents section of the page so the page numbers stand out from the articles that I have chose. I also made the size of the page numbers bigger to they stand out even more. I have also reduced the text size of the page number and date.